tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post7534167297273101312..comments2024-03-27T12:41:31.596-06:00Comments on Book Dreaming: Manuscript Advice - Harrison Demchick of Ambitious EnterprisesShannon O'Donnellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-90929760527154156212012-09-29T10:35:03.698-06:002012-09-29T10:35:03.698-06:00So insightful! This is why I constantly praise Har...So insightful! This is why I constantly praise Harrison and his wonderful abilities.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13037679132104381715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-72129684621497048342012-09-15T09:27:13.496-06:002012-09-15T09:27:13.496-06:00Excellent advice, there must be rules even within ...Excellent advice, there must be rules even within the fantastic. Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-5204220670758994082012-09-14T21:00:27.726-06:002012-09-14T21:00:27.726-06:00I've found more than a few reality issues like...I've found more than a few reality issues like this in my novels, although it's usually my wonderful critique partners who spot them. I see something in my head and just expect the words on the page to convey all the info. Sometimes they don't quite cut it!Stephanie Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17437077559099315853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-54284878207082886252012-09-14T18:31:21.316-06:002012-09-14T18:31:21.316-06:00Excellent point. Stories have to be logical at bas...Excellent point. Stories have to be logical at basic levels, regardless of the premise.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-69874930631726188962012-09-14T07:53:05.554-06:002012-09-14T07:53:05.554-06:00Harrison is the best! This is a perfect example. Harrison is the best! This is a perfect example. Miranda Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17880449368013410349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-61895997827854917022012-09-14T06:36:26.164-06:002012-09-14T06:36:26.164-06:00Gosh!! What a most sobering post with lots of less...Gosh!! What a most sobering post with lots of lessons to learn!! Thanks lovely Shannon and Harrison! take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-27765180365025684302012-09-14T06:25:45.724-06:002012-09-14T06:25:45.724-06:00Awesome post. As writers, we easily miss the holes...Awesome post. As writers, we easily miss the holes because we know how things are suppose to be. Sometimes it takes a keen eye to see what others accidentally miss. Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-41311900315201368322012-09-14T05:50:17.270-06:002012-09-14T05:50:17.270-06:00Following the rules we establish in our world-buil...Following the rules we establish in our world-building is so true. Great advice. Thanks for the reminder.S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3945626570622121439.post-89148446517359776812012-09-14T05:02:26.298-06:002012-09-14T05:02:26.298-06:00This is great advice Harrison. It's so true th...This is great advice Harrison. It's so true that actions have to make sense and in a fantasy, the magic has to make sense and needs to have rules to follow.Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.com