*sigh* I want to write like that. I want to take something as ordinary as brown and make it extraordinary. I want to see everyday things in deeply creative ways - "Brown is a feeling/You get inside/When wondering makes/Your mind grow wide."
What is brown?
Brown is the color of a country road
Back of a turtle
Back of a toad.
Brown is cinnamon
And morning toast
And the good smell of
The Sunday roast.
Brown is the color of work
And the sound of a river,
Brown is bronze and a bow
And a quiver.
Brown is the house
On the edge of town
Where wind is tearing
The shingles down.
Brown is a freckle
Brown is a mole
Brown is the earth
When you dig a hole.
Brown is the hair
On many a head
Brown is chocolate
And gingerbread.
Brown is a feeling
You get inside
When wondering makes
Your mind grow wide.
Brown is a leather shoe
And a good glove -----
Brown is as comfortable
As love.
If you want to feel your writing brain grow two sizes bigger, read Hailstones and Halibut Bones (the title comes from the color white). My favorite line comes from green: "Green is the fuzz/ That covers up /Where winter was." Wow. She refers to pink as the "little sister of red" and to purple as pink's great grandmother. She assigns every color a sound and a smell and a feeling, and it feels perfect - every. single. time.
I want to write like that.
What makes your writing brain feel like it's grown two sizes?
24 comments:
Brilliant prose like that. Nice choice. When a writer takes an every day word like brown and makes me see it differently. Likey...
I've never heard of these color poems but I'm already in love and I love that she calls pink red's little sister. How special is that!
I must snag this book immediately. I could feel the passion and the strength behind the writing and that only makes me want more!
Poetry. Thanks for this one!
Sleep!
Beautiful..ordinary can be
Coffee. Oh, and those brain growing pills I take.
Stephen Tremp
Ooh love that poem. Sleep, and music help me in the brain growing for me :)
All these workshops here at SCBWI-LA. I hope that at some point I can internalize all the wonderful information I've gotten over the past few days.
I love thinking about colors and symbols and adjectives...figuring out new ways to use them, expand them, enrich them... This is why I can't wait for revision time! I feel like that is when I can focus on language at the micro level.
Awesome - I have that book in my classroom poetry box - it's great.
Reading something new and fresh and unique grows my brain :)
Brown IS the earth! What a great, great color!
No wonder I love brown so much!!! :O)
Brown is chocolate and gingerbread.
And cinnamon and vanilla!
Poetry's not normally my thing, but this one I like.
reading great writing makes great writers.
Loved this snippet Shannon! She made me see and taste brown~ wonderful!
I agree with Heidi~ reading great writing spurs me on.
IT'S SO GOOD TO HAVE YOU BACK!
another excellent post. brown is CHOCOLATE NOM NOMMMM
hehe
thanks, love!
I use this book with my students every year....the writing they come up with is just beautiful.
Shelley
What lovely ways of personifying color. Great post!
Wonderful poem! I love the color brown, as it's so warm and inviting. Thanks so much for sharing this!
Beautiful! I want to write poetry like that too!
When I read Jane Austen, that's how my writing brain feels--like it's swelling with Knowledge.
Thanks for sharing, Shannon.
Beautiful! I want to write poetry like that too!
When I read Jane Austen, that's how my writing brain feels--like it's swelling with Knowledge.
Thanks for sharing, Shannon.
Thanks for the reminder. I remember seeing/reading this book at my kids' school, but you made me want to see it again.
Oh, to write such a tight poem.
Oh. Oh. Oh.
Thank you, Shannon, I think!
Blessings,
Patti
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