"Applying a short story arc to each scene in a novel will strengthen the plot and character motivation, and build tension to the climax of the book."
~ Suzanne Pitner
In her article, "Novel Writing Tips, Applying Short Story Arc to Scene Structure", Suzanne Pitner explains how we can apply the traditional short story arc to individual scenes of our MS in order to better build the story's tension.
"Thinking of scenes as mini stories, each with a beginning, middle, and end helps writers to define the characters, plot, and subplot in a novel. A short story focuses on one plot element, and a scene should do the same thing."
She suggests ending our scenes at the height of the conflict, and opening the next scene with how the conflict was handled. The final scenes of the story will provide the resolution.
Suzanne compares this strategy to waves building in intensity throughout the story.
"Each scene will build upon the one that came before, but each will still maintain that mini story arc. As this continues through the book, the tension will rise until the novel reaches its dark point. It will be like riding a crest of a wave that builds in power until it reaches the shore. At the dark point, the water recedes. To the unaware person, it might appear that things are going to be fine. Until you, the author, bring all the force of those waves back to shore in a tsunami, the climax of the story.The article is really quite interesting, as are ALL of Suzanne Pitner's writing articles. I suggest you follow the link below and read the full text.
28 comments:
I find all this extremely interesting, although I don't write novels, it's good to know about other aspects of writing.
Yvonne.
What a great reminder! I try to keep the structure of my novels pretty tight and build the stakes as I go. I also try to make sure I have tension on every page - big or small - but something that makes the character uncomfortable.
I loved this post!!! I'm never sure how I continue to build tension, I take pride in being able to provide tension in a scene however revising does help me reach that goal.
Great post and tips! I keep the tension alive because I have a TON of character conflict and a TON of action. My Antag is always flirting around on the pages and it creates plenty o' tension. Infact, I have to dial it down a notch and have semi-lull chapters just to give my reader a break. I do like her structure on how to do this so I'll keep it stored in this brain of mine ;) Thanks for sharing!
this makes a lot of sense and it's something I hope to adapt in my books. My last book it just 'happened' that way- I was lucky in that the story and scenes came to me with mini conflicts and resolutions. In my earlier books though...eh, pacing was a real issue. lol. Great post!
I like your diagram.
She suggests ending our scenes at the height of the conflict, and opening the next scene with how the conflict was handled. The final scenes of the story will provide the resolution.
I'm really really trying hard to do this!!
This is a great idea (though hopefully I was already doing it). I also try to pay attention to the character arc in each scene, especially when it comes to emotions.
Well I'm now to analyze my scenes for this. :D
Good advice! I'll have to go back and check out how well I do this...or how bad, haha. Thanks for the article!
Oh yeah, there has to be rising tension. Just making things worse for a character makes it work for me. =) My poor characters.
This sounds like an excellent article. Thanks for posting.
Great advice. I've tried to do that with my writing. I'm not always successful, but I try.
Great post!! I try and try to write my chapters like short stories - it's very difficult because you don't want to end the chapter like in a short story but need to keep the reader's interest longer!
Thanks for the link!! take care
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Good television does this as well. My favorite series at the moment is "Supernatural" which oftentimes features a "monster of the week" type storyline. But then, the whole thing factors into the big picture for a season-long story arc. It's masterfully done and makes the whole thing that much more entertaining.
I think I started using a technique kind of like this after reading the Maze Runner/Scorch Trials.
Dashner ends every chapter on a cliffhanger/point of high tension, which makes you never want to put the book down.
I've been trying to make the end of each of my chapters intriguing or super-tense, and since most of them have only one or two scenes, it works. But I never thought about "scene" past making sure I have a scene goal.
Thinking of it as its own distinct entity makes a lot of sense, though, so thanks, Shannon!
I love the idea of ending a scene at the height of the conflict. You come across the best advice!
Thanks for sharing this, Shannon! I love the comparison of a scene with a short story and how both should focus on one plot element. Excellent post! :)
I remember reading Magic Treehouse books with my kids and we could never stop at the end of a chapter. She always had these mini cliffhangers that made the kids beg me to read the next chapter. I've always tried to do that with my stories so that people want to keep reading.
This info will be very helpful during the revisions I'm doing now. Thanks so much!
You know, this is something I learned before, but had completely forgotten about. Hopefully I do it anyway, but I'm going to consciously do it now. Thanks for the reminder!
Thank you so much for this post, Shannon. These are really great advice.
Interesting. I've never thought of using the arc per scene.
Hi Shannon -
Excellent article! I like ending a chapter with a cliffhanger whenever possible.
Blessings,
Susan :)
Terrific article. I'm working on ending my chapters with cliffhangers rather than wrapping things up too well. This will help :)
Ooh, this will be great for my revisions...
Thanks Shannon!
(bit behind in my blog reading!) This looks _great_ and exactly what I've been doing lately, looking at the short story structure and relating it my book, so thanks for the heads up. Will read it more closely and follow the links later tonight, heading out to work soon.....
I think this is so important to remember, esp when we're revising. It can make a huge difference in pacing and encouraging the reader to keep reading!
Really helpful post! Thanks for all of the tips. I'm in the "learning while writing" stage so will be making notes on this advice. (Great comments, too.)
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