In honor of Shannon M.'s poetry day, I promised to post a poem.
This is a shortened version of one of my favorites.
The Skin We’re In
Shannon O’Donnell
Shannon O’Donnell
The skin we're in, it limits us
It keeps us bound to earth and dust
We can’t step out of bones and skin
To reach beyond the space we’re in
We’re meant to place our hope and trust
In One who loves each one of us
In prayers is where God wants to hear
Of all the things we need down here
Don’t be afraid to turn His way
And pray to God with love today
For peace, for health, for family
For courage, friends, or to be free
Send loving thoughts and pleas for help
To those too far to reach yourself
The skin we’re in can’t stretch as far
As God’s embrace, His loving arms
He reaches out to those in need
When prayers request He intercede
God hears us when we pray in faith
For help to guide the human race
We need to pray more often, though
So Grace and Truth can help us grow
Bow your heads and fold your hands
And pray to God, who understands
The skin we’re in may limit us
And keep us bound to earth and dust
But prayer is more than bones and skin
And reaches past the space we’re in
In God we place our faith and trust
That He may bless each one of us
23 comments:
Aw, thanks for participating Shannon--I LOVED this. (You definitely put my pathetic poetry skills to shame.) There are some beautiful metaphors in here, I can't pick a favorite. So I'm just going to say I loved the whole thing and I hope lots of people find this and read it. :)
What a great opening line! Lovely.
I was in the mood for a good poem. This one put me in a good mood. Well done.
"Send loving thoughts and pleas for help
To those too far to reach yourself"
Those lines made me think of Haiti!
What a beautiful and touching poem!
That was lovely Shannon. I thought of Haiti too.
What a beautiful poem, Shannon. I loved it!
Oh WOW! Really nice!!
I love the opening line too, and the way you get your point across through it. Great poem!
I agree with the others...I also thought of Haiti.
Lovely poem...
much love
I love that the opening and closing were the same! Beautiful and poignant with truth.
That was so nice. I loved the ending, tying it all together. :)
Beautiful, eloquent, and so very timely.
I missed poetry day. Oh well, no matter, I SUCK big time at it. I fancy myself a poet, but truth be known, I ain't!
I love your poem though. Let's pray for the devastation in Haiti. God hears us. :-)
Lovely - easy to "hear" and beautiful :)
Your students are so lucky to have you. You're creative and intelligent, and you celebrate everything.
Hope your day was as poetic as your writing.
This poem is so beautiful. I'm glad you shared it :)
Thanks so much for the comments, everyone. I'm at a state conference, working on English curriculum standards, so I haven't had much time to blog today. I SOOOO appreciate your comments! :-)
Shannon, as my father used to say, "She's a poet and don't know it." Excellent job, my Montana blogging pal. I'm very impressed, and touched. And now I see we have yet another mutual love. We really do need to meet at a conference someday! :)
Very cool. I did not know there was a poetry day... ? I love poems. this one was lovely.
Lovely!
Thank you so much for sharing your hopeful poem. Lovely.
Poetry. We don't see enough of it.
Well done!
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